Free Fall
My heart sufferstravails at the edgeof razor-taloned mockeries,slipping into a chasmof bloodcurdling spiteas it mutely free falls...perilously redliningwith rapid-fire pulsesof reckless...
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Ouch...a very disturbing read....riddled with pain, sadness and all the things that go with a broken heart...sighhh...well written.sioux
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Damn...that's a powerful piece of writing indeed...very strong metaphor...well done! I know I was born, and I know I will die,the in-between is mine...I am mine..."I am Mine" - Pearl JamWelcome...
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Hi sioux,Thanks...all of those sad entities are a part of my heart. I'm glad you replied...*Frodo*
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Beautifully written - very powerful and moving."Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic Parable
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Hi soulsease...wow, I'm a spacey hobbit today, I missed your awesome reply! Thank you, I appreciate it...Hi Valoe, you're too kind...thanks!*Frodo*
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Wow, I'd say you did a great job of expressing the pain of heartache all right, it's very much felt through your poem. Great writing.
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